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Monday, July 29, 2013

Shocking your World to Life by JC Hay

You’ve seen the arguments on-line, so I won’t bother going into the details. Certain entities have accused writers of science fiction romance (SFR) of being light on the science, to the point of leveling the term space opera (as though that were some kind of insult). Despite my pride at being lumped in alongside such luminaries as E.E. “Doc” Smith and George Lucas, I also felt a bit of sting. Could we create better science fiction worlds to contain our heroes and heroines? Could we, in a sense, bring issues out in our fiction, to better illustrate what happens to the human condition when the world changes?

I found a possible answer in an independent but much loved role-playing game from Joshua A.C. Newman – Shock: Social Science Fiction. I realized that a similar method to the one developed by Newman for creating science fiction settings with meaning could be adjusted to world-build better issues and characters into my SFR. Even better, it was generic enough that Fantasy and Paranormal Romance writers could also employ it.
Step 1: Define your “shocks”

Shocks are the “key concepts” that make your setting different from the modern world; Colonies on Mars, Vampires exist, Faster-than-light travel. You don’t have to think about how these pieces work right now. Indeed, your characters might not have any idea how they work, because the shocks are inherent to the world. Like a car, or the Internet, they are omnipresent. Because of this, they are also your “Free Pass” items. You don’t have to explain them, they just work. While there’s no limit, two or three shocks work well, and more than five stretches the reader’s belief. Write your shocks down across the top of a piece of paper, making each shock a column:


Step 2: Choose your “issues”

Here’s the part where we inject meaning into our setting. Come up with two or three issues you want to address (directly or indirectly) in your story. Issues are the hard questions – the things we can’t easily answer that directly impact your characters’ stories. These can be philosophical issues, such as ‘what makes us human?’ or they can be specific social issues from today (just looking at the news for 60 seconds gives us ‘is the Nobility relevant?’, ‘Are stand-your-ground laws moral?’, and ‘Is it acceptable to reveal government secrets?’)  Note that these are always worded as questions, and while you are likely to have an opinion, they shouldn’t be something that is easy to answer. Write your issues down the side of your piece of paper, creating rows that intersect with the columns:

Step 3: Place your characters

The real key to this method takes place here – pick an intersection between an issue and a shock. Your character exists where these two pieces interact. In the sample, I’ve put our hero, Navigator James Wellington, at the intersection of FTL Travel and What makes us human? This already sets up conflicts for him as a character – navigating at faster-than-light means being modified to be more than human, but is the gift worth what it has cost him? Other characters will view him as different from human, either greater or lesser, and his character arc is shaped by that interaction.

 For another example, in the film “Blade Runner” Rick Deckard exists at the intersection between “Human replicants are nearly indistinguishable from humans” (a shock) and “what defines us as human?” (an issue). The arc of Deckard’s story explore both sides of the argument, contrasted between the two (other) replicant characters Roy Batty and Rachael. Think about how the issue and the shock interact, and about your character’s relationship to both. This gives them an underlying connection to the world, and makes the issues meaningful to the story.


Science Fiction, Fantasy, and Paranormal Romance all deal with worlds that are different from the ones our readers inhabit. By tying our characters firmly into the underpinnings of our stories, we can increase the depth of our characters and make the world we’ve created for them more real to our readers. We increase our ability to add meaning, and give our stories the kind of impact that brings readers back again and again.

 
BIO:   JC Hay writes romantic science fiction and space opera, because the coolest gadgets in the world are meaningless unless you have someone with whom to share them. In addition to Romance Writers of America, he is also a proud member of the SFR Brigade, and FF&P. JC is steadfast in his belief that knitting is relaxing, that kilts are always appropriate, and that Deckard is a Replicant. You can find JC Hay on Twitter (http://twitter.com/j_c_hay), Goodreads (http://www.goodreads.com/author/show/2915850.J_C_Hay), and on his (currently being re-designed) Web site, http://jchay.com.

4 comments:

Nancy said...

Who are these nay-sayers? Geeks? Maybe, but tell them to go watch the original Star Trek TV shows. They made many false science assumptions because it was FICTION yet we got so many actual scientific goodies from their visions: computer discs, iPads, doors that open when you approach...the science followed. God Speed, JC
Nancy Lee badger
an original Trekkie
http://nancyleebadger.blogspot.com

JC Hay said...

Thanks, Nancy. Rather than make another attack article against SFR's detractors, I'll just link to Foz Meadow's beautiful takedown on Huffington Post: http://m.huffpost.com/us/entry/3375184

I agree with points you and she both make--romance has always been linked to SF, and the most important advancements can only be evaluated in terms of their emotional impact on humanity. It inspires us to create the impossible.

Aidee Ladnier said...

As long as there is a species that needs to procreate, romance will have a place in science fiction.

This was a phenomenal article. I truly believe that any speculative element should be considered an extra character in a novel. And I totally agree that the best science fiction has something to say about us as humans, as a society, as a planet. (It's definitely the reason that the Twilight Zone is still relevant.)

I'm going to steal your grid immediately for my next novel. Thanks so much for such an excellent article.

Sincerely,
Aidee

JC Hay said...

Thanks, Aidee, for the kind words. Glad to hear you'll try the technique. Let me know how it works for you!