When a writer writes a short story, novella, or novel, a
writer always uses the five senses in telling the tale. This pulls the reader
into the story, brings them closer to the hero/heroine and yes, even the
villain, plus many other characters involved with the storyline. Stories and
novels are words on paper, not celluloid. And since authors are artists, you
are painting a picture for them. Bringing it to life like a movie on the big
screen.
We all know what the five senses are, but here they are
anyway: sight, smell, taste, touch and hearing. When the hero in a paranormal
romance makes love with the heroine for the first time (or all the other times
too), the reader wants to feel the moment, taste it, know what sounds
lovemaking makes, see the what the lovers see, and even the scents of sex. All
this will aroused the reader and make them fall in love with the characters as
the writer has when she/he written it.
And with romance being important in a paranormal romance,
then the five senses are what are needed to blossom it in vibrant color.
Example from a short story of mine no longer in print:
Sarah closed her eyes, enjoying the sensation of his lips on
her skin. His fingers under her chin and drew her chin forward. Shocked, she
popped her eyes open when his hard, sensuous lips captured hers, gentle at
first, then growing more demanding and taking what she had to give. What she
wanted to give. Her tongue slipped in and found a fresh, minty flavor.
She circled her arms around his neck and he enfolded her
closer. Her nipples hardened as her breasts pressed against his chest. His
hardness poked at her stomach and she gasped against his lips. Taking a deep
breath, she breathed in a sexy aftershave that reminded her of limes.
“Love your aftershave.”
“I don’t use an aftershave, not while I am the super hero.”
Oh my, it’s him..
The reader learns that the hero’s (um, super hero) skin has
a great odor that entices the woman, his mouth shows he must gargle, and both
are becoming aroused. You learn a little bit more about the two characters in
this love scene. This is done, whether a sweet scene of romance or hot and
heavy sexual intercourse with the gloves off erotic sex scene. Whichever you
write, you want the reader to feel, smell, taste, touch and see it all, exposé
the intimate details. Without the five senses the sex scene or even a simple
kiss becomes boring, even bad writing.
And since this is paranormal, another type of sense would be the sixth sense, appropriate to the story you are telling, whether a psychic, shifter, vampire, sorcerer, witch, alien, fairy, or any other being connected to the supernatural, fantasy, or science fiction worlds. Unscientific senses can be just as powerful, if not more so, than the conventional ones. And they also happen to be a great way of foreshadowing dramatic events to come.
Sapphire
Phelan
Blurb from The Witch and The Familiar:
Mortal woman Tina discovers she is part of a
prophesy that says she and Charun, her demon Familiar, must make love so she
can become the witch she is fated to be. If she doesn't do it and stop the
demon army bringing Armageddon to the Mortal Realm on Halloween, she won't
stand a chance in Hell.
A year later, just when Tina and Charun thought
it was all over and that their life would be normal—another prophesy pops up.
If Lucifer snatches Tina and mates with her before the last chime before
midnight of the new year and gets her pregnant with his son, that the real
Armageddon would begin, spelling the end of life as they knew it. This time
they get help from an archangel, Jacokb, but with demons, Lucifer, and a cute
demon bunny with fangs out of a Monty Python nightmare, out to stop them and
Heaven not lending a hand, will Tina this time lose the battle and become the
mother of the Antichrist and the start of a new Hell on Earth?
About Sapphire Phelan:
Sapphire
Phelan has published erotic and sweet paranormal/fantasy/science fiction
romance along with a couple of erotic horror stories. Her erotic urban fantasy,
Being Familiar With a Witch is a Prism 2010 Awards winner and a Epic Awards
2010 finalist. The sequel to it is A Familiar Tangle With Hell, released June
2011 from Phaze Books, Both eBooks were combined into one print book, The
Witch and the Familiar, and released April 24, 2012.
She admits
she can always be found at her desk and on her computer, writing. And yes, the
house, husband, and even the cats sometimes suffer for it!Dark heroes and heroines with bite...sink your teeth into a romance by Sapphire Phelan today. Contact her at:
4 comments:
Love that line: "oh my, it's him..."
Janice~
Glad you liked that line, Janice.
What a wonderful post! I never thought about the senses while reading and/or writing and now it is so obvious - no wonder it is such an awesome pastime, habit, or should I say addiction! Thank you for sharing with us, off to sniff out some supper heroes ;)
You're welcome, Denise. Without the five senses, a story would be missing so much.
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