Among
the many writing tips I’ve come across, one that has stuck in my mind is to
incorporate an element of the strange and unusual in your book. My debut Urban
Fantasy series involves a necromancer, zombies, and demons. It doesn’t get much
more unusual than that, but I guess it depends on how you look at it J.
We all
have odd things that happen to us in our day-to-day lives. Things we shrug or
laugh at, then keep shopping or walking. A friend once told me of a homeless
man who entered the bus she was riding, holding one of those red viewfinder
toys, empty of a picture wheel. (Talk about the strange and unusual. The
pictures in those wheels could be downright weird.) He rode the bus and pointed
the viewfinder at riders, clicking away, as if taking pictures. He was harmless,
and the passengers, including my friend, found it amusing…and strange.
The
story made an impression on me, obviously. I wrote a sequel with my necromancer
heroine riding the subway when a homeless man steps on with a viewfinder toy,
observing people through the toy. Of course, I upped the creepy factor, and it
gave an edge to the sequel. It played up how my heroine was feeling insecure
after a particularly stressful scene where she learns important, but disturbing
things about her past.
I also
like incorporating unusual settings. One of my scenes takes place at the
Mechanical Museum in San Francisco. The museum harkens back to the days of old
carnivals and beachside boardwalks, housing a collection of antique arcade
machines, some dating back to the 1800s, all in working condition. If you’re
ever visited it, it’s one of those unique places you don’t often find. If you
haven’t, check it out! It’s so much fun.
My heroine meets with an old friend at the museum, and the weird kookiness of
the exhibits serves as a great backdrop to show how my heroine’s life has just
crossed the normal boundary from which she will never return. And then I end it
with her playing a guillotine game…
With
Urban Fantasy or Paranormal, the story and characters are strange and unusual, so
what’s the point? Even though the characters are supernatural and deal with
supernatural problems, they still live in the ordinary world and cope with
ordinary life issues: death, love, acceptance, loyalty, and friendship. Not so
strange after all. So, as we may sometimes experience for ourselves, when the
lines separating the normal and abnormal, natural and preternatural become
blurred, it can provide a moment for the character to question how they chose
to cope with their power, or question their very sanity, which is always fun.
Or, the
strange and unusual can actually ground the story in reality, which seems
contradictory, but we all have those, what
the…? moments, where truth is stranger than fiction, and when a book
stumbles upon such a moment, the reader can sometimes relate more to the oddity
than the sword wielding demon. (Of course, nothing wrong with sexy, sword
wielding demons!)
As with
all things in writing, anything can be overdone, and throwing things in that
don’t relate to the overall conflict or theme will take the reader out of the
story, but incorporating a small moment of strange and unusual can add power,
provide a weird juxtaposition or fun moment, test your characters, highlight a character
strength or flaw, or add humor.
Does
anyone have any strange happenings or examples from their books or life to
share?
Noemi
Ghirghi writing as Mimi Sebastian
Twitter
@mimisebastian
Bio:
Noemi
Ghirghi writes as Mimi Sebastian and raised herself on books and the strange
and unusual with an unhealthy dose of comics and Scooby Doo. Loving angst-filled
romance thrown in the mix, she decided to blend all those elements in a steamy
mix in her first Urban Fantasy series, the Necromancer Books. The first book,
The Necromancer’s Seduction, debuts July 15, 2013, with ImaJinn Books.
Noemi
spent two years in the Ivory Coast with the Peace Corps and loves to introduce
tid-bits from her experiences in her writing. She’s a member of Romance Writers
of America and the Fantasy, Futuristic and Paranormal chapter of RWA. A
transplant from the beaches of Florida, Noemi now wanders the desert in Phoenix
, AZ, and attempts to balance writing with a day career, fantastic family, and
household diva: her Amazon parrot.
4 comments:
Great post Mimi, waiting patiently for it's arrival!
Thanks Virginia! Yes, please wait patiently for me while I squirm in my seat :)
Hi, Mimi.
Great post. I chuckled as I realized that I tend to do the opposite in my books. I take the strange and unfamiliar settings and make them as ordinary as I can, so the modern reader, whether he/she likes sci-fi or not, will accept it and get engaged.
LOL, Vijaya. Given that some of your books are sci-fi, and like you said, set in strange and unusual places, that makes sense! Thanks!
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