Please welcome guest blogger Gail Gaymer Martin
is what creates the action in your novel. The technique varies. Some
people are what writers call Pantsters or SOTP (writing from the seat of
their pants) while some writers create an outline or synopsis. Often
the outline or synopsis is sketchy, leaving openings to take interesting
detours on the character’s journey. This allows creativity without
being tied to a pre-proposed plot. No matter what kind of writer you
are, one element that happens early in the story planning is called
creating the premise. A premise is the core of the novel—what it’s about
and the dramatic issues that move it to its ending. A premise also
forms assumptions for readers. From the way you build your story,
readers presume the story will follow a logical pattern, so authors can
be assured that readers have expectations.
readers expectations are based on their past experiences. Let’s say, a
man and woman decide to marry on an exotic island. Readers assume the
novel will contain a wedding and a trip to an island, probably romantic,
possibly humorous. If a book opens with a man lifting the lid of his
trunk and finding a dead body, the reader assumes he will contact the
police and the story will be the pursuit of the killer and perhaps why
the body was in this man’s car. Consider your personal assumptions when
you hear the premise of a novel or movie.
premise begins with the central story idea. Something is going to
happen. For example, what happens if someone left a baby on your
doorstep? What would happen if you received a letter saying you are the
heir to your great uncle’s fortune? What would happen if you won a
multi-million dollar lottery? What would happen if the woman you loved
asked you to marry her only for convenience? You could come up with a
. . .if your dog dug up a human arm in your back woods?
. . .if you found an old map in your attic?
. . .if you learned as an adult you had a biological mother who gave you away?
. . .if you were accused of murder without an alibi?
. . .if your husband vanished coming home from work?
. . .if you fell in love with a prisoner?
. . .if you were asked to work undercover?
Here are some movies you may have seen that offer a unique premise.
. . .if people were unable to lie. Invention of Lying
. . .if four men on an overnight stag party forget what happened. Hangover
. . .if an abused pregnant teen decides her life must change. Precious
list could go on eternally, but this premise list is a sample of many
creative “what ifs”. The premise is the central idea that you will use
to build your story.
though, want their novels to be unique and different, not just the
standard premises that are sometimes overused. By creating a premise
with a traditional expectation and twisting it, you come up with a more
original story. What if. . .
the person who falls in love with the prisoner is a man and not a woman?
the body in the trunk looks identical to the man who found it?
the map in the attic leads to a place vaguely
recalled from childhood where something happened but the person had
blocked it from his memory?
the body found in the woods is the person’s former spouse?
twisting the premise, you open new doors and make your novel more
original. Look at your WIP’s premise and ask yourself how you can give
it an unexpected twist. How can you make it more original? How can you
add something that will surprise your readers? A unique premise is one
way you can add a spark to your story that will linger with readers long
after they’ve read your novel.
learn more about plotting techniques, please join Gail Gaymer Martin
for a three week online workshop—Plodding or Plotting?—from April 9 to
April 29 sponsored by the Fantasy, Futuristic, and Paranormal, a chapter
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